It Sounds better but now I think there is to little middle now instead ..
Be carefull with lows on the bass .. It makes it somewhat muddy.
I don't know if you have 2 kicks (basedrums) or just one..
But generally when I do Unz I use 2..
One for ompphhh and one for the Kadisch.. Understand what I mean ?
I think the basedrum is somewhat thin..
Other than that.. Excellent work imo
just eq or filter two bassdrums one low one high (could even compress one i guess) ... turn the low frequency one down a little cos too much brmmmm can ruin things and bobs your uncle.
one becomes the brrr
the other becomes the thhttt...