Commodore Remix

Ok...

http://www.vgmix.com/song_view.php?song_id=1312

go there and have a listen....

ok listened?... ok great.

now u may have noticed the "non vocal tag".. thats cos i aint bolted on me singing yet but i shall soon.. but i really need to have the tune at the back right 1st and i need comments etc etc.

so let me know what ya'll think n thanks in advance

A good start, although the mix is somewhat odd: the hi-hat is extremely piercing, and the strings very quiet. The vocal effects are VERY loud, too.

Agree with Craig here about the mixing (if it's mixed).
Anyway I like the beat and it makes me curios for the vocals

ok ive taken the usefull constructive critismn's and ego stretching and done version 2.. which is id say the complete (but not totally finished) non vocal.

its still at the same adress as above if your interested in hearing the 2nd version of it... again any comments anyone has to make be them good or bad are greatly appreciated.

thanks... and vocals on their way (though the vocal version will be just a tad different in structure but only to accomodate me).

thanks all.

oi!! i thought u wuz gonna let me sing on it for ya??