Commodore Remix

Ok, so i've tried again, somethings still not right but I cant quite put my finger on it, so im asking the community to tell me whats wrong.

http://www.lazarus.org.uk/~subzero/ninja-redux.mp3

Hmmm. The chords sound wrong to me when the flute lead kicks in. Overall sound is OK.

Well depends all on who you are and what you want to have in your tune.

But the piano drowns in the other sounds, and there are many things.
I'd just say you should sharpen the sounds more, it's too soft overall, and drown.

The uuhh sound is really MIDI like, I really don't enjoy it.

But I am mastering novice, I can't say how to do it

Did you create the midi yourself? Just wondering becuse it sounds disturbingly much like my old midi,

http://www.nic.fi/~chris75/mymidi.html

Not to blame you or anything. It is however based on the same sid