Commodore Remix

I have a strange issue. Although I can hear what I want to create in my head, I only ever seem to get so far in replicating that in FruitLoops.
Today I've been doing a Lotus 3-Title remix, which is kind of a Reggae/Hip Hop type thing, and as per usual I've gotten pretty far with the groundwork of the track, but I can't seem to add anything "magical" to it.
I'm wondering, is there anyone out there with Fruitloops 5, who'd like to have a go at finishing it off for me, by tweaking it, adding bits and the like, then shoving a dual credit on the finished piece of work?

Here's a snippet if you want to hear it so far..

Anyone?

i make no promises, but i can try if you just send the flp to me and then i send the result to you and you consider if its near what you was expecting

Couldn't find your Email addy anywhere, so I've sent you a PM with a link to the file in it. Thanks