Commodore Remix

Here's my Project X remix in Renoise - I believe it's finished but I can't master for toffee, so further work may be required.

Hurt yourself here:
http://www.re-volutionmedia.com/documen ... ojectX.mp3

and let me know which bits cause the most pain

The Piano-rythm sounds strange (I like it @ 3:05 though, that`s the first time it seems to fit in the music) and the Beat isn`t pounding enough IMO.

Right now at this state I would give it a 3/10 (maybe 4).

(AHHH,don`t hurt me, I`m just being honest as always )

All feedback is helpful
Are these drums a bit beefier?

http://www.re-volutionmedia.com/ProjectX2.mp3

Don't quite understand what you mean about the piano - is it the pitch or something else?

Yeah, the beat is far better now. But that`s just my opinion. You should get some feedback from another musician, since I`m only the Fan/Listener of all of your Remixes . (and a bitch in rating, I know )

Don`t know how to explain what exaclty is wrong with the Piano/Keyboard. It doesn`t feel good within the Music...so out of range. Don`t expect any technical details from me.

The piano would have more presence if you'd lessen the reverb (or replace it with a delay) and boost its mid-range frequencies.

Beefier drums and I've reduced the reverb considerably and given it more sharpness in the mid-range.

Hows it sound now?

http://www.re-volutionmedia.com/documen ... Xdrums.mp3