Nice, and a fascinating idea. There's a couple of places where the melody doesn't "flow" smoothly, to my ears, and the bass is a little "squelchy". But top marks for trying something unusual!
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Sounds pretty good but I don't have any ideas to expand it. On the topic of unfinished songs, do you have another Exploding Fist remix up your sleave and if not, is there some way to convince you to make a remix of Fist 2 subsong 1?
I downloaded it another day and listened to it today... nice tune, dunno how to improve it... errr... why do I have that strange "infamous" feeling with this song?!
Had a choir in my heart and had to kill it to survive.
Nice remix - but to finish it I would do this.
add some reverb to the bass line.
place some wooshing sound fx's in the track and pan them left to right etc etc. - will help build up the track.
Use another lead sound halfway through the track - this will keep the track flowing !!!!
Otherwise this is an interesting remix
keep up the good work mate