A little Song besides the Remixing. looking for comment =P

Zzr · Post by **Zzr** » 07/05/2006 - 3:16

Greetings.

i just made a small track for one of my passions, space music.
i hope its catching the feeling of a space nebula, and so i think it does but iam not sure as always, i wanted to ask for some feedback of you ppl.

dont expect too much pls, but thanks for listening.

http://oldskool.txfx.de/zzr/zzr-nebula.MP3

regards

Chris Abbott · Post by **Chris Abbott** » 07/05/2006 - 8:28

A Nebula wasn't the first mental picture I saw, though if I imagine a Nebula when listening to your music it kind of works.

The lead instrument is kind of annoying, and the space music I'm used to (listening and creating - you heard Crystal Dreamscapes?) has a lot more going on: a lot more layers).

Chris

Analog-X64 · Post by **Analog-X64** » 07/05/2006 - 13:49

Great track with a lot of potential. Ok here is my 2 Cents.

- There is a sound in the background that sound like a High Pitch noise you would get from a Dirty Circuit from an electronics device. If you need it to fill in a void consider replacing with a Pad or some other FX sound.

- I like the way the Lead synth trails off, however it has too much of an edge to it, a Razor Edge!!. I would replace it with a different softer lead, or if you can modify that one and soften it up a bit.

- The Meoldies and arrangment is pretty good, may I also recommend introducing some new instruments playing some of the same melodies for a few bars just to change things up, than near the end you can bring back the old instruments.

Zzr · Post by **Zzr** » 08/05/2006 - 21:55

thanks to both of you for the suggestions, i'll try and work it out.

Analog-X64 · Post by **Analog-X64** » 09/05/2006 - 16:41

Looking forward to hearing more of your great work.

Good Job.

gibs · Post by **gibs** » 09/05/2006 - 20:16

I like it