Trace - Gerry The Germ Song 5(WIP)

trace · Post by **trace** » 16/09/2006 - 10:19

This is Trace typing, i have been on a vacation but now i'm back with a collaboration with my great friend PowerTrace

Trace - Gerry The Germs Song5 (Feat. PowerTrace)

It's not long around 1:37 min, we will make it alittle longer and do some tweaking

Max Levin · Post by **Max Levin** » 16/09/2006 - 12:13

Tomtar i Lingonskogen-dance!

Chris Abbott · Post by **Chris Abbott** » 16/09/2006 - 15:09

I love Gerry the Germ. Could I make some suggestions?

1) The bass is too leaden and un-bouncy for the song.

2) the lead is missing a note where Rob probably did a slide but you didn't pick it up. It's on the quick series of notes going up. I miss that note!

3) Too much reverb robs it of life. You could be dancier and bouncier with a tune like this

4) The lead instruments are too "supermarket", IMHO...

5) The static string chords could be something much more dynamic.

Hope you don't mind the critique...!! I just love Gerry the Germ, so I tend to have strong feelings on it...

Chris

trace · Post by **trace** » 16/09/2006 - 16:05

Thanks chris

I take the critics in a good way, I will try to improve those things you said

This was just a quick experiment, i have a hard time to find the right instruments

I like Gerry the germ too so it is hard to make them better (in a good way)