A Slave To Karma

[mstodge]

Hello everyone,

I've been a massive fan of the C64 since I can remember and fell in love with the music right from the start.
Here is my first attempt at a track. Would really appreciate any feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/mark-stothard/a-slave-to-karma

Thanks
Mark.

[LMan]

Welcome Mark. I love your tune, beautiful soundscape. I'm not certain if the absence of a bass track is a good or a bad thing. Nevertheless very well done

[Commie_User]

It's a pleasant sounding little track. You don't need the works, dependent on what you do with it. Great for advertising or promo background on television, crowded market as that is.

And now the next stage... finding your own identity and recording tracks with some more bite.

[mstodge]

Thanks to you both for the nice comments.
Lman: I think a bass track is what's missing, thanks for pointing that out. Back to work I go...