Cybernoid II

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Mordi
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Re: Cybernoids II

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Added vocals, what do you think?
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Are the sound levels on the vocals good for you guys, or should they be louder? :duh:

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lyrics:
Time to break the mold and free the chains of fear
free the chains of fear
free the chains of time

repeat(x99)
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Re: Cybernoids II

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Great work!!! :cheers: Your best work up to 3:41.

Theres only the part from 3:42 that i dont like so much. Theres a strange background instrument that doesnt really fit imo...

Wrong notes and bassline from 4:41 and still some strange background sounds.

Apart from this this is a fantstic remix... :thumbsup:
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Re: Cybernoids II

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very very good.
but there are still wrong notes left at

2:06/2:07
4:26-4:31
4:40-4:43

maybe it's intended, but for me it sounds wrong.

personal taste (that's just me!):
- i think i liked the higher tuned lead better (my ears are c64 proven and can't be hurt by squeaky sounds :wink: ). i felt it had more life to it and fitted better to the euphoric style.
- i'm not too keen on the vocals, imo they add nothing to the track, instead they overshadow it (esp. 2:10-2:40 and the piano part). they seem a bit uninspired and random.
- the transition at 4:15 could be better
- the "new" intro with the lead played in chords is correct but i'm not sure if it fits perfectly for that instrument. it sounds a bit "whiney" compared to the arpeggiated sound of the original.

but again, that's just nitpicking, personal taste and of course you can never satisfy everyone 100%...
nevertheless great work so far!
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Re: Cybernoids II

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What do you think about this version? (See first post)
Final? :cheers: :cheers: :cheers: :cheers:
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Re: Cybernoid II

Post by spacefractal »

Its a great mix.

Otherwice its only two notes in 2.06-2.07 which still sound a bit wrong as Monty wrote.

elsewice it turned out great.
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Re: Cybernoid II

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I fixed that and submitted to RKO. :cheers:
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Re: Cybernoid II

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So it went gold. :thumbsup:
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