Commodore Remix

Greetings.

i just made a small track for one of my passions, space music.
i hope its catching the feeling of a space nebula, and so i think it does but iam not sure as always, i wanted to ask for some feedback of you ppl.

dont expect too much pls, but thanks for listening.

http://oldskool.txfx.de/zzr/zzr-nebula.MP3

regards

A Nebula wasn't the first mental picture I saw, though if I imagine a Nebula when listening to your music it kind of works.

The lead instrument is kind of annoying, and the space music I'm used to (listening and creating - you heard Crystal Dreamscapes?) has a lot more going on: a lot more layers).

Chris

Great track with a lot of potential. Ok here is my 2 Cents.

- There is a sound in the background that sound like a High Pitch noise you would get from a Dirty Circuit from an electronics device. If you need it to fill in a void consider replacing with a Pad or some other FX sound.

- I like the way the Lead synth trails off, however it has too much of an edge to it, a Razor Edge!!. I would replace it with a different softer lead, or if you can modify that one and soften it up a bit.

- The Meoldies and arrangment is pretty good, may I also recommend introducing some new instruments playing some of the same melodies for a few bars just to change things up, than near the end you can bring back the old instruments.

thanks to both of you for the suggestions, i'll try and work it out.

Looking forward to hearing more of your great work.

Good Job.

I like it