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Trace - Gerry The Germ Song 5(WIP)
Posted: 16/09/2006 - 10:19
by trace
This is Trace typing, i have been on a vacation but now i'm back with a collaboration with my great friend PowerTrace
Trace - Gerry The Germs Song5 (Feat. PowerTrace)
It's not long around 1:37 min, we will make it alittle longer and do some tweaking
Posted: 16/09/2006 - 12:13
by Max Levin
Tomtar i Lingonskogen-dance!
Posted: 16/09/2006 - 15:09
by Chris Abbott
I love Gerry the Germ. Could I make some suggestions?
1) The bass is too leaden and un-bouncy for the song.
2) the lead is missing a note where Rob probably did a slide but you didn't pick it up. It's on the quick series of notes going up. I miss that note!
3) Too much reverb robs it of life. You could be dancier and bouncier with a tune like this
4) The lead instruments are too "supermarket", IMHO...
5) The static string chords could be something much more dynamic.
Hope you don't mind the critique...!! I just love Gerry the Germ, so I tend to have strong feelings on it...
Chris
Posted: 16/09/2006 - 16:05
by trace
Thanks chris
I take the critics in a good way, I will try to improve those things you said
This was just a quick experiment, i have a hard time to find the right instruments
I like Gerry the germ too so it is hard to make them better (in a good way)