Lazy Jones

[kjetiln]

I was at a Trentemöller concert last night, and I just got so addicted to the music I tried making some in the same style myself. I ended up with a remix of lazy jones. I've never done this style before, so please tell me what changes I need to do. I guess it's might be too repetitive.. dunno..

http://www.savefile.com/files/1539364
Subtune 21.. the kernkraft thingy...

[Mordi]

I love the lazy-jones melody, I'll give it a listen.
I'll just scribble as I listen to it:

I really like the start.
Love the bass there.
Nice build-up.
Ooh, here comes the kick!
I'm liking it so far.
Love that bass.
Dont love that background lead... Not sure why.
Hmmm, I dont like the lead. Too... Slow?
It doesnt really "take off", but its good nonetheless.
The other subtune you have at about 4:00 sounds odd. It doesnt quite match the original one, and feels a bit off.
I dig the part at 3:30 and onwards, but please find a better lead!

I'd say this is 'Very good'. Could be 'Outstanding' when its done!

[kjetiln]

Thanks alot!
I'll think about this while I continue working on it.

Sounds like I have to redo alot of stuff...