Commodore Remix

I hope youre not fed up with Plastic Pop just yet. (since this one is on the way, and Skitz is making one too) :p
This actually started as an original piece.

I know the vocals dont fit so good, but I dont feel like fixing that just yet. I also know that some of the transitions are a bit "unfitting" and uninspired, got any suggestions? Also going to change the start, so it doesnt start right away like it does now.

(09/12/08) http://willhostforfood.com/users/Mordi/ ... t%202).mp3

It sounds like you have an automatic panning effect on the main instrument at around 40 seconds. I think it makes it sound choppy because instead of each successive note switching between each speaker what I am hearing is a note starting on the right, getting cut short as it moves to the left.

I don't like the drums at all either. I think you should just leave it at the first one you did, that one was great, much better!